Saturday, July 16, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 7/17/11

I'm going to continue the scene from last week's SSS snippet.  Kane is seeing a vision after drinking a glass of blood from the Grand Oracle of the Council of 12. Enjoy!

She was beautiful.  Long dark hair; full, round lips. Her cafe au lait complexion stood in stark contrast to the deep-set brown eyes that stared past him.  She was smiling, but he could see that the emotion didn't reach her eyes.  Her eyes held a pain that he knew all to well. They were haunted.

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14 comments:

Sherry Gloag said...

This is my fist visit and I enjoyed this choice.

D Carney said...

Great description of her. Nice six!

Melisse Aires said...

He sounds perceptive. Good job!

Unknown said...

Great Six! Love it!

Anonymous said...

Great description - interesting six

Sandy Nachlinger said...

Good description. It raises the question of what's causing her pain.

Cara Bristol said...

Easy to get a picture of her from your description.

Lorien Lyn said...

Intriguing snippet! Great vision. :)

Bree said...

Wow! Great description!

Melynda Price said...

This is a great six! Very descriptive with intriguing depth.

Lindsay said...

Love her description

Alix said...

I loved the smile not being in the eyes, great descriptive six! Thank you.

Debra Moore said...

Great six!

1000th.monkey said...

Can't wait to meet her :)