Saturday, July 16, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 7/17/11

I'm going to continue the scene from last week's SSS snippet.  Kane is seeing a vision after drinking a glass of blood from the Grand Oracle of the Council of 12. Enjoy!

She was beautiful.  Long dark hair; full, round lips. Her cafe au lait complexion stood in stark contrast to the deep-set brown eyes that stared past him.  She was smiling, but he could see that the emotion didn't reach her eyes.  Her eyes held a pain that he knew all to well. They were haunted.

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14 comments:

Sherry Gloag said...

This is my fist visit and I enjoyed this choice.

Dee Carney said...

Great description of her. Nice six!

Melisse Aires said...

He sounds perceptive. Good job!

Tigris Eden said...

Great Six! Love it!

lizculver said...

Great description - interesting six

Sandy Nachlinger said...

Good description. It raises the question of what's causing her pain.

Cara Bristol said...

Easy to get a picture of her from your description.

Lorien Velez said...

Intriguing snippet! Great vision. :)

Bree said...

Wow! Great description!

Melynda Price said...

This is a great six! Very descriptive with intriguing depth.

Lindsay said...

Love her description

Alix said...

I loved the smile not being in the eyes, great descriptive six! Thank you.

Debra Moore said...

Great six!

1000th.monkey said...

Can't wait to meet her :)